Writing to Explain Rubric

 

Prompt:  Explain why the first contact between English settlers and the Aborigines could be described as disastrous.

 

Body

 

The writer uses . . .

Score

A.  Detail sentences do not support topic (allow NO irrelevant detail, stop this section)

0

B.  Detail sentences provide reasons (what and why) to support topic sentence (at least 3)

1

C.  Detail sentences provide reasons (what and why) to support topic sentence (4 or more)

1

D.  Support sentences include descriptive sentences (separate from “what and why” sentences)

1

E.  Support sentences include sentences of example (separate from “what and why” sentences)

1

F.  Support sentences include past tense accounts (separate from “what and why” sentences)

1

G.  Correct paragraph structure (indents first line, returns to margin)

1

 

Section Score:  Add B-G

 

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Conclusion

 

The writer uses . . .

Score

A.  No recognizable conclusion

0

B.  Conclusion restates the topic and position

1

C.  Conclusion restates the topic and position and includes a personal observation or a summary (combine into one sentence of conclusion using a conjunction or a semicolon)

1

 

Section Score:  Add B-C

 

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